1./ What sentence is the thesis statement in the introduction?
I believe that the thesis should state the main points we want to cover in the body paragraphs. The introduction talks about relationships as a need for us to be motivated, and then the body paragraphs talk about family, friends and how relationships need sparks to stay alive. The introduction is general, and it should be specific to the subject you want to cover.
2./ Does love make you do great things just to please your loved ones?
The first paragraph talks about love as the strongest force in life. I agree with that statement. Love is also a big factor of motivation. I think love is a huge word because it can refer from the love to your family to the love for your country. Concrete details or examples will help visualize your point because it is not clear.
3./ Does friendship can be considered as an insignificant thing?
Paragraph 4, sentence number 3
“Sometimes you get motivated by the most insignificant thing, something you wouldn’t even know matters so much, friendship.”
The person that inspires me the most is my mother, and moreover; I consider her my best friend.
I believe that the thesis should state the main points we want to cover in the body paragraphs. The introduction talks about relationships as a need for us to be motivated, and then the body paragraphs talk about family, friends and how relationships need sparks to stay alive. The introduction is general, and it should be specific to the subject you want to cover.
2./ Does love make you do great things just to please your loved ones?
The first paragraph talks about love as the strongest force in life. I agree with that statement. Love is also a big factor of motivation. I think love is a huge word because it can refer from the love to your family to the love for your country. Concrete details or examples will help visualize your point because it is not clear.
3./ Does friendship can be considered as an insignificant thing?
Paragraph 4, sentence number 3
“Sometimes you get motivated by the most insignificant thing, something you wouldn’t even know matters so much, friendship.”
The person that inspires me the most is my mother, and moreover; I consider her my best friend.
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